100%. Such great language that it makes you want to read it slow. I've allowed the passage of time before commenting on this one and the main thing I remember is that I took the time to stop and think at multiple times about so many different things.
Good writing happens when the author is really real and really present in the story.
I love Elliot Turner’s style of storytelling, the design of his paragraphs, the repetition of his friends name Chuey, the chunks of random time scenes - all very captivating. Of course none of that would matter if the characters were not drawn so achingly beautiful in all their innocence and tragedy. Deeply authentic.
I deserve a "first reader" trophy for finding so many of these AOTDs! Just saying.
You do Bill! Stellar finds - keep it up!
Interesting and captivating style of writing that keeps you wanting more and more details about Chuey, his friend, and his life.
100%. Such great language that it makes you want to read it slow. I've allowed the passage of time before commenting on this one and the main thing I remember is that I took the time to stop and think at multiple times about so many different things.
Good writing happens when the author is really real and really present in the story.
I agree 100% Bill - LOVE that observation! Really real and really present - really good!
I love Elliot Turner’s style of storytelling, the design of his paragraphs, the repetition of his friends name Chuey, the chunks of random time scenes - all very captivating. Of course none of that would matter if the characters were not drawn so achingly beautiful in all their innocence and tragedy. Deeply authentic.
UPVOTE! WOOT!